Chapter 15 page 13

June 26th, 2013, 4:00 am

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Did you see this coming? What? No you didn't, you liar. >D

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artificer urza, June 25th, 2013, 6:53 pm     Reply

Did you see this coming? What? No you didn't, you liar. >D

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Rumiel, June 26th, 2013, 1:46 pm     Reply

I didn't actually. For once. O_O I'd almost forgotten that she was a child to start with.

artificer urza, June 26th, 2013, 6:09 pm     Reply

@Rumiel: "For once"? Ouch...
Although, perhaps I'm reading too much vitriol in your comments.

Charvale, June 26th, 2013, 6:32 pm     Reply

Wait! What... What happened?!
Why is Jinny back to her original form? How did she..?
*flop, twitch, twitch*

DeathJockey (Guest), June 28th, 2013, 7:25 am     Reply

<.< wait ... what the? oh right, she was a kid lol

ametueraspirant, July 3rd, 2013, 10:40 pm     Reply

who is that and what did she... oh that's jinny? oh...

Rumiel, July 5th, 2013, 3:59 am     Reply

@artificer urza: lol Sorry about that, what I meant is normally in most things I read, I can kinda map things out. It's very rare when a story doesn't follow the usual patterns for it's type. You hand out a lot of surprises, but I really did forget that she was a kid.

Rumiel, July 5th, 2013, 3:59 am     Reply

@artificer urza: Though, I have to say I've gotten used to the crap Bern is going through... The lack of positivity to her given situation has become pretty regular.

artificer urza, July 6th, 2013, 5:36 pm     Reply

@Rumiel: The lack of positivity is mostly due to her own attitude, I think.
I'm curious, would you care to share some predictions?

RadicalTrain, April 18th, 2016, 6:28 am     Reply

The alchemy wore off!

Will she miss having boobs.

Algorev (Guest), February 12th, 2018, 9:23 am     Reply

Dragon Ball GT mode activated!


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