Chapter 28 page 14

September 18th, 2019, 6:00 am

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MercenaryX, September 18th, 2019, 9:32 pm     Reply


Wait, what just happened? Are we seeing a flashback or something?

artificer urza, September 19th, 2019, 7:57 am     Reply


@MercenaryX: It's a "meanwhile, over the next few nights". I was worried the transition would seem too sudden. Guess I was right.

MercenaryX, October 2nd, 2019, 10:12 am     Reply


Yeah it was a bit too subtle, a time lapse or some sort of indication of time passing or some sort of indication of a transition would've helped.

MercenaryX, October 2nd, 2019, 10:13 am     Reply


Mostly it's the previous page that kind of throws me off on to this one. The pages silt is fine it's just that I couldn't figure out how this one related to the previous page.

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