Chapter 8 page 6

May 5th, 2010, 7:00 am

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artificer urza, May 4th, 2010, 8:59 pm     Reply

Has anybody ever seen a puppet move when their strings have been cut? Pinocchio doesn't count: he had no strings to begin with. Didn't see this coming, did you?
An interesting comment was brought up about this entire puppet sequence; one reader felt that it didn't fit. Does anyone else feel that way? If so, can you specify in what manner it doesn't fit?

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Ponyta, May 5th, 2010, 9:04 am     Reply

Somehow, I feel like it does fit, maybe it's just me. XD
THANK YOU so much for the update :D
(poor girl though... must be traumatizing) XD

Seedless-acorn, May 5th, 2010, 10:10 am     Reply

To me it does make sense that there would be some sort of space or transition between being bit by a vampire and whatever happens next, because there is that death/near-death moment that people experience in different ways. I do see the connection to her being a puppet and her normal life. :3

kriolynn, May 5th, 2010, 10:25 am     Reply

i get it, i can't describe things well, sooo...but i get it. do you count robots as puppets? they are controlled by humans like puppets but don't have strings...

cici-mici, May 5th, 2010, 4:00 pm     Reply

I think it fits ^^

FieryAnimated, May 5th, 2010, 6:01 pm     Reply

She was born into a poor-working class, she was made to be a maid, she was told what to do since she was born & the irony is that she has had more freedom with the freaks then she ever had anywhere else. She has been freaking out over what Mr Sparkly said & hasn't yet figured out that she has all the freedom she wants & more all she has to do is take it. Now we have a puppet whose morality strings are being cut question is does she stay a puppet or wake up? WAKE UP B!

webcomiclover, May 5th, 2010, 6:58 pm     Reply

This is such a great chapter! It's all dark and insightful!

VoID, May 6th, 2010, 10:48 am     Reply

I find it very fitting, I love how you added this into the story. And the poetry is very lovely, it fits the atmosphere.
I'm curious how this is going to turn out and what the next page will be :)

Mortonflies, May 6th, 2010, 8:27 pm     Reply

I feel as if it ought to have been shorter, its good imagery, but I felt kind of like you beat me over the head with the whole puppet/strings deal. I do like this page though.

RadicalTrain, April 18th, 2016, 5:30 am     Reply

Unless you're Pinocchio.


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